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A love poem

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A love poem

Post by romstreets on Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:35 pm

A foolish boy :|

For the first time, I embarass myself,
to confess my love in a foolish way.

I am a fool by doing these to you,
buying gifts, offering rides and being nice.
I know very well, things I said and things I've done,
ruined everything from the very start.

Only if I've not done these,
everything would have worked like magic,
I know ways to play with feelings,
I know words that charm every girl,
it is just a game that last not ferever.

I have fallen in love with you,
and so it shall explain everything.

You've made me fallen in love with you.
For you, I will not act, I could not lie,
because love is sacred.

My love for you, is nothing to you,
but your feelings is everything to you.

I could not tolerate this ugly truth,
I do not have a crytal ball for guidance,
all I have is my heart fool of hope.

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its a inner feeling that i felt and so i wrote it down in form of poem
i hope some feed back from people who shared same feeling :)
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Re: A love poem

Post by developing_success on Tue Mar 09, 2010 11:29 am

I wished i could give you more feedback but i was never in love so all i could say it's: Nice poem :wink:
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Re: A love poem

Post by chetan on Thu Jun 24, 2010 7:01 pm

good one .. actually its true bcoz guy usually do these things which are mentioned in poem
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Re: A love poem

Post by Amy Twain on Thu Oct 21, 2010 7:08 am

HI romstreets,

That's a nice poem. It's describing the true sentiments of a person in love. Very heartfelt and sweet. Keep it up!
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